Wednesday, July 31, 2013

My 5 sentence story

The words that we had to use:
  • Quick
  • Stand
  • Out
  • Suddenly
Then we had an option of:
  • Oww
  • Embarrassed
  • Um

“Quick, pass the ball to me,” I call.
“Stand in the circle,” yells Olivia.
“Out of the way, I'm trying to shoot the ball in the hoop,” I say to Katie who is defending.
Suddenly, I get the ball into the hoop.

“Oww, the ball hit me in the face," I said.


  1. Awesome work Hannah,
    I like how you have done it on netball.
    I like how you have done recording.
    Well done.

  2. Awesome work Hannah,
    I like the way you put the words in colour!
    I like the sentences that you choose.
    You had a clear voice when you had recorded.
    Well done.


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